1. Access Magazine, March 2011- Front coverComedienne Anjelah JohnsonThis should be--Comedian Anjelah Johnson
2. Access Magazine, March 2011- Page 3
Our cover girl, comedienne and actress Anjelah Johnson, grew up in San Jose and recently moved to Los Angeles to pursue her acting career.
This should be--Our cover girl, comedian and actress Anjelah Johnson, grew up in San Jose and recently moved to Los Angeles to pursue her acting career.
3. Access Magazine, March 2011- Page 3
Filmmakers will unveiled more than 170 films during the festival, which ran from March 2 to 12.
This should be--Filmmakers unveiled more than 170 films during the festival, which ran from March 2 to 12.
4. Access Magazine, March 2011- Page 3
This level of local collaboration has developed Cinequest's identity, says Hussey.
This should have quotations--"This level of collaboration has developed Cinequest's identity," says Hussey.
5. Access Magazine, March 2011- Page 7
The true colors of a comedienne
This should be--The true colors of a comedian
6. Access Magazine, March 2011- Page 7
During the pilot-audition season in Los Angeles, the comedienne and actress opened up to Feature Editor Jennifer Elias and writer Lidia Gonzalez.
This should be--During the pilot-audtion season in Los Angeles, the comedian and actress opened up to Feature Editor Jennifer Elias and writer Lidia Gonzalez.
7. Access Magazine, March 2011- Page 8
And Johnson's famous Vietnamese manicurist character, Tammy, was born on Myspace -- The start of what Johnson jokes as a cult-following.
This should be lower case--And Johnson's famous Vietnamese manicurist character, Tammy, was born on Myspace -- the start of what Johnson jokes as a cult-following.
8. Access Magazine, March 2011- Page 8
Her younger brother Kenneth, she says, was her inspira-tion for her MAD TV character, Bon Qui Qui.
This should be together and have a comma after brother--Her younger brother, Kenneth, she says, was her inspiration for her MAD TV character, Bon Qui Qui.
9. Access Magazine, March 2011-Page 8
I believe Bon Qui Qui is also one of those -- A lot of people act the way she acts, and a lot of the time Bon Qui Qui will say things that we only wish we could.
This should be lower case and not have a comma before and--I believe Bon Qui Qui is also one of those -- a lot of people act the way she acts and a lot of the time Bon Qui Qui will says things that we only wish we could.
10. Access Magazine, March 2011-Page 8
This year the young actress will be tying-the-knot with fiance, Manwell Reyes, at an undis-closed location in the Bay Area.
This should not have a hyphen--This year the young actress will be tying-the-knot with fiance, Manwell Reyes, at an undisclosed location in the Bay Area.
11. Access Magazine, March 2011-Page 8
Ironically, Johnson will spend the evening of April Fool's Day performing at the Im-prov Comedy Club in San Jose where a portion of proceeds will be donated to the Lincoln High performing arts program.
This should not have a hyphen--Ironically, Johnson will spend the evening of April Fool's Day performing at the Improv Comedy Club in San Jose where a portion of proceeds will be donated to the Lincoln High performing arts program.
12. Access Magazine, March 2011-Page 10
... members Dominic "Goldenchyld" Cueto, Nick Ngo, Ryan "DJ Replay" Buendia, Germel "G-Wrex" Boado, Paolo "Cutso" Bello, and Aaron "Squareweezy" Aquino are a group of guys who have shared roots in turntablism and friendship since the early 1990s.
This should not have a comma before and--... members Dominic "Goldenchyld" Cueto, Nick Ngo, Ryan "DJ Replay" Buendia, Germel "G-Wrex" Boado, Paolo "Cutso" Bello and Aaron "Squareweezy" Aquino are a group of guys who have shared roots in turntablism and friendship since the early 1990s.
13. Access Magazine, March 2011-Page 10
While they can be heard at venues throughout the Bay Area, the group also marked its territory in New York, Miami, and the Philippines.
This should not have a comma before and--While they can be heard at venues throughout the Bay Area, the group also marked its territory in New York, Miami and the Philippines.
14. Access Magazine, March 2011-Page 10
The group's distinct sound is a concoction of soul, breaks, booty bass, and dirty south blended with rock, pop and '80s.
This should not have a comma before and--The group's distinct sound is a concoction of soul, breaks, booty bass and dirty south blended with rock, pop and '80s.
15. Access Magazine, March 2011-Page 8
Together the diversity of San Jose and the cutthroat mentality from the "City of Angels" has brought Johnson fame, happiness and a fiance she never thought possible, as a teenager.
This should not have a comma after possible--Together the diversity of San Jose and the cutthroat mentality from the "City of Angels" has brought Johnson fame, happiness and a fiance she never thought possible as a teenager.